Monday, 21 May 2012

THEORY TO PRACTICE - changes after crit

Contents and Introduction


- Increasing the size of the text
- Correcting the contents section
- Removing the image to make the designer profile more relevant

Designer profile


- Introducing the image of Edward Meadham and Benjamin Kirchhoff from the introduction page in order to make the profile more relevant to it's content. Also gives you a sense of who it is the publication is discussing. Putting a face to name.
- Colour changes
- Creating a title for the profile page

Content



- Spreading the content out over four pages instead of two. Split the information into more manageable and readable chunks.

Meadham Kirchhoff content


- Spread the information over two pages, instead of one. Allows for more focus on the information.

What is Riot Grrrl?


- Moving the Riot Grrrl page to a new destination and adding an illustration on the facing page.

Final thoughts


- Including some final thoughts in the publication to sum my thoughts and feelings

Back of publication


- Including references, sources and things that have informed my work throughout

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